tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post5411738753123380961..comments2024-03-27T18:30:58.662-07:00Comments on Imagine: red fields Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)http://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-9695198360799368592014-10-28T06:17:48.928-07:002014-10-28T06:17:48.928-07:00This is why it feels as a happiness - a contrast b...This is why it feels as a happiness - a contrast between atmosphere at home and freedom running at the field with flowers....resonate.... :)xhumbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-73715931748103554062014-10-27T09:39:43.589-07:002014-10-27T09:39:43.589-07:00I think that's one of my favorite lines too.
...I think that's one of my favorite lines too.<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2014/10/26/whirling-on/" rel="nofollow"><b>Whirling Haiku</b></a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-17237034488729806842014-10-26T19:13:38.762-07:002014-10-26T19:13:38.762-07:00Those fields covered in red that are run through. ...Those fields covered in red that are run through. Such a great poem.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-71260629706756130902014-10-26T17:34:42.865-07:002014-10-26T17:34:42.865-07:00Wonderful written. Wonderful written. Cathyhttp://thequietone.net/2014/10/26/wordle-184/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-26597597390565373352014-10-26T16:21:25.604-07:002014-10-26T16:21:25.604-07:00Awesome! I enjoyed the romp.
ZQAwesome! I enjoyed the romp.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-54406108100862910762014-10-26T14:49:38.359-07:002014-10-26T14:49:38.359-07:00Evocative, touching, yet charming. A delight to r...Evocative, touching, yet charming. A delight to read.keiths ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-36449810714992921472014-10-26T14:18:19.403-07:002014-10-26T14:18:19.403-07:00"we tumbled a week’s worth of laughter"
..."we tumbled a week’s worth of laughter"<br />Such a vivid image, as is the running among the red tulips/poppies. Poppies give me WWI and II, so I love the contrast of life and death, the running and running "far from the sleeping house of strange-mooded giants.'Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-48417821308688912422014-10-26T14:11:43.176-07:002014-10-26T14:11:43.176-07:00I like the repetition of "we ran", there...I like the repetition of "we ran", there is such a drive here. I feel the urgency. Great piece!Inger-Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16312912766394408963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-53124646021283332742014-10-26T13:32:14.043-07:002014-10-26T13:32:14.043-07:00Love this poem. As children we ran and didn't...Love this poem. As children we ran and didn't understand or fully trust adults. I love the intimacy the children create. Made me wonder about the 13 years. What happened to the friendship? Anyway, I really enjoyed this.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-60377322302008665992014-10-26T11:09:44.655-07:002014-10-26T11:09:44.655-07:00I love "the sleeping house of strange-mooded ...I love "the sleeping house of strange-mooded giants".....that is how kids feel - exactly - when faced with the incomprehensible behavior of some adults. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-57318971356232830842014-10-26T09:07:44.460-07:002014-10-26T09:07:44.460-07:00This seems at the same time a little threatening a...This seems at the same time a little threatening at the same time it evokes the fantasy of a child.. the sleeping poppies and the parent giants are very nice pictures... Lovely cadence here...brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-16305624097546488812014-10-26T08:59:09.610-07:002014-10-26T08:59:09.610-07:00siblings together somehow soften the blow of reali...siblings together somehow soften the blow of reality ... those first 13 years can be hell .... Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-27753891172185934252014-10-26T08:57:05.409-07:002014-10-26T08:57:05.409-07:00siblings together somehow soften the blow of reali...siblings together somehow soften the blow of reality .... Those first 13 years can be hell .... Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-6049931590197159112014-10-26T07:28:25.131-07:002014-10-26T07:28:25.131-07:00(Hope it works this time!) Love the feeling in you...(Hope it works this time!) Love the feeling in your poem. The words you emphasized gave it an extra 'oomph'. Beautiful!Laura Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17165700659874093849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-45242710011442025562014-10-26T07:07:06.115-07:002014-10-26T07:07:06.115-07:00Love the feeling of this poem. The words you empha...Love the feeling of this poem. The words you emphasized gave it an extra 'oomph'. Beautiful!Laura Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17165700659874093849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-90091123286618120912014-10-26T06:40:58.075-07:002014-10-26T06:40:58.075-07:00I like the way you evoke this childhood memory of ...I like the way you evoke this childhood memory of early run in the fields. Only children can escape giants and laugh about it.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-46243826165088811402014-10-26T06:14:00.598-07:002014-10-26T06:14:00.598-07:00Poignant Pearl, these are such difficult times… ch...Poignant Pearl, these are such difficult times… children are courageous, in them exists the possibility of a peaceful world.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-77612360396791836652014-10-26T06:06:28.357-07:002014-10-26T06:06:28.357-07:00Lovely evocation of childhood here, Pearl. I feel...Lovely evocation of childhood here, Pearl. I feel the joy and hear the laughter.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-82157152565573930132014-10-26T05:10:44.937-07:002014-10-26T05:10:44.937-07:00A lovely story poem, with some memorable lines: &q...A lovely story poem, with some memorable lines: "we tumbled a week’s worth of laughter" will stay with me.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-31422948197071025692014-10-26T05:03:22.512-07:002014-10-26T05:03:22.512-07:00A beautiful innocent childhood memory
:)A beautiful innocent childhood memory<br />:)Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-20396091415682981002014-10-26T04:56:06.391-07:002014-10-26T04:56:06.391-07:00loved it.the tempo and the motion of the lines tak...loved it.the tempo and the motion of the lines takes the reader swiftly into the tulip fields.wonderfully doneAbin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-31368750161303126502014-10-26T03:57:30.366-07:002014-10-26T03:57:30.366-07:00The first thirteen chapters inform a life...i am g...The first thirteen chapters inform a life...i am glad there was a hand to hold through the war...and beyond...also loved the alliteration and pace...like we were running with 'you'Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-86277809508869375702014-10-26T03:46:10.284-07:002014-10-26T03:46:10.284-07:00Children love games of pretense and the opening wi...Children love games of pretense and the opening with the tulip/poppies along with the parent/giants set the scene. I too dream of those days so long gone and still add chapters to the fantasy.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.com