tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post3452245945531454909..comments2024-03-28T12:15:53.050-07:00Comments on Imagine: On Heaven's Peak Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)http://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-89500329575684845822013-07-05T03:44:47.119-07:002013-07-05T03:44:47.119-07:00feathered breaths of wonder - great description of...feathered breaths of wonder - great description of our breath when in awe! Beautifully written and now you can shout shout shout with joy from heaven's peak!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-80218617723336544642013-07-03T16:56:39.218-07:002013-07-03T16:56:39.218-07:00:-)
ZQ:-)<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-67198133270561782013-07-02T23:09:19.399-07:002013-07-02T23:09:19.399-07:00Each of nature's creatures have attributes tha...Each of nature's creatures have attributes that the others crave and none more so that mankind's craving to fly and feel that exhilaration you describe so well in your poem. Our poor copy with mechanical aids does little to satisfy our lust for flight and makes us even more envious especially when you describe it so well.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-69482441945705399422013-06-30T18:36:54.060-07:002013-06-30T18:36:54.060-07:00Thank you Veronica - I suppose it is my rebellion ...Thank you Veronica - I suppose it is my rebellion - when writing in other genres - I drive editors up the wall with hyphens! Thank you so very much for stopping and commenting :)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-91952361923566532192013-06-30T18:36:00.971-07:002013-06-30T18:36:00.971-07:00OH MY - such comparisons have my heart beating fas...OH MY - such comparisons have my heart beating fast ... Thank you deeply, broadly, profoundly :)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-81417862635545827122013-06-30T18:35:28.968-07:002013-06-30T18:35:28.968-07:00Audrey - I am deeply touched by your comment and t...Audrey - I am deeply touched by your comment and thrilled that you have stopped by :)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-91353350700532136332013-06-30T18:34:56.824-07:002013-06-30T18:34:56.824-07:00Awww Sherry - If I could take you with me - I am s...Awww Sherry - If I could take you with me - I am simply thrilled - Thank you so very very much :)<br />Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-79736436813881886532013-06-30T18:34:15.334-07:002013-06-30T18:34:15.334-07:00How very very sweet - I am absolutely delighted th...How very very sweet - I am absolutely delighted that you hear the rhythym ... Thank you for stopping and for your wonderful comment:)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-62896138626077169442013-06-30T18:33:27.825-07:002013-06-30T18:33:27.825-07:00and then after all the pomp and head swelling comm...and then after all the pomp and head swelling comments there is Stanski- right to the point in your own unique way! Thanks so very very much :)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-69369096038321445562013-06-30T18:32:42.207-07:002013-06-30T18:32:42.207-07:00Ah thank you Talon - and with your name you should...Ah thank you Talon - and with your name you should know - lol. Appreciate your very complimentary words deeply. :)<br /><br />Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-58074786325619687972013-06-30T18:31:47.699-07:002013-06-30T18:31:47.699-07:00OH MY again - Marian - If I were forced to pick a ...OH MY again - Marian - If I were forced to pick a poet - only one poet - it would be Whitman - I have never been so compared. THANK YOU for stopping and I deeply appreciate your comment :)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-54277707122097042092013-06-30T18:27:55.930-07:002013-06-30T18:27:55.930-07:00Thank you - Delighted that you enjoyed and feel th...Thank you - Delighted that you enjoyed and feel that it would translate well read out loud. :)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-69605698734548831622013-06-30T18:27:15.279-07:002013-06-30T18:27:15.279-07:00Oh MMT - how delicious - what a comparison! Thank...Oh MMT - how delicious - what a comparison! Thank you so much for stopping by :)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-64644270605232574372013-06-30T18:26:38.015-07:002013-06-30T18:26:38.015-07:00Yes! Don't we? ! Thank you so very much for s...Yes! Don't we? ! Thank you so very much for stopping and commenting.Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-87219216668265593012013-06-30T18:25:34.167-07:002013-06-30T18:25:34.167-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-81135190436281883772013-06-30T18:25:22.814-07:002013-06-30T18:25:22.814-07:00Thank you, thank you, thank you Mary for your care...Thank you, thank you, thank you Mary for your careful reading I am delighted that you enjoyed the particular word usage - always dicey to know if one is becoming too precious - but this is where the words quickly took me and I followed. Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-10138132902881916112013-06-30T18:24:03.586-07:002013-06-30T18:24:03.586-07:00Not to sound like a teen - but - I must say - must...Not to sound like a teen - but - I must say - must I? Yes I must ... <br />OMG ... some of the comments and comparisons here are just so deeply gratifying I hardly know where to begin - and if I were to begin - I wouldn't be able to end - THANK YOU - Whitman/Hopkin -ish? ... be still my heart ... on second thought ... not a terrific wish for oneself... keep on beating fast, and gratefully with enormous appreciation for each comment and careful reading - I am simply delighted ! Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-13066368636114367332013-06-30T17:20:58.178-07:002013-06-30T17:20:58.178-07:00Nicely done Pearl. I wonder if that's what a f...Nicely done Pearl. I wonder if that's what a fledgling albatross feels when it firsts launches off the cliffs and possibly doesn't return for a few years. (PS, isn't it a pain to write using hyphens? I'm always pressing the space bar...lol) Veronica Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15288280932510764014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-64604538904370400152013-06-30T16:49:35.375-07:002013-06-30T16:49:35.375-07:00Also Gerard Manley Hopkins-ish, Pearl--the unusual...Also Gerard Manley Hopkins-ish, Pearl--the unusual use of language, the hyphenated, coined phrases . . . Very nicely done! Gerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11956363982769429474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-53113467941310385832013-06-30T12:13:22.238-07:002013-06-30T12:13:22.238-07:00Your word choice is always so wonderful--beautiful...Your word choice is always so wonderful--beautiful write!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-64100489568324275112013-06-30T11:51:31.582-07:002013-06-30T11:51:31.582-07:00Aw thank you Brian - delighted that you enjoyed th...Aw thank you Brian - delighted that you enjoyed the style :)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-34310865211332774182013-06-30T10:30:35.868-07:002013-06-30T10:30:35.868-07:00I felt like I was flying on his wings as he saw th...I felt like I was flying on his wings as he saw the glorious view........fantastic write! Love the "tiny feathered breaths of wonder".Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-89201366435515170912013-06-30T10:20:01.109-07:002013-06-30T10:20:01.109-07:00very col use of descriptors...i like your linking ...very col use of descriptors...i like your linking of them with hyphens as well...the sun-smear...ha...cool visual...the whole run of 'meadow-marsh-savannah,<br />sand-ice-tropic-ocean shimmered seas' is very cool...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-22019988073739924892013-06-30T09:45:56.965-07:002013-06-30T09:45:56.965-07:00That rush of words is very Whitman-ish...
It also ...That rush of words is very Whitman-ish...<br />It also fits the subject - A breathless experience - imagine flying for the first time! marianvhttp://marianv.blog.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-9959755119092343812013-06-30T07:31:33.107-07:002013-06-30T07:31:33.107-07:00Oh Brenda - Thank you! Whitman and Song of Myself...Oh Brenda - Thank you! Whitman and Song of Myself particularly one of my all time favorites! To be mentioned in same breath made my (mhmm) week? month? - lol- year?! Awwww - thanks happy you enjoyed :)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.com