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Sunday, January 3, 2016

No place for perfection in poetry





No place for perfection in poetry
(an imperfect rondeauy palindrome)

No place for perfection in poetry
form flowing from wisped whispers
rustling leaves burst, blossom -fall
in spaces between beating blood
running hot and chilled pulsing-
horror, honor, mud, manna - all
No place for perfection in poetry
language of love, lusty mess of life-
yearning, yawps and yarns spun
filamented fibers floating - flying
weaves in and about and through -
back again–again until the tapestry
Time and vision written across -
the stars of navied night blaze –No.
No place for perfection in poetry

No place for perfection in poetry
the stars of navied night blaze –No.
Time and vision written across -
back again-again until the tapestry
weaves in and about and through
filamented fibers floating - flying
yearning, yawps, and yarns spun  
language of love, lusty mess of life
No place for perfection in poetry
horror, honor, mud, manna - all
running hot and chilled pulsing -
in spaces between beating blood
rustling leaves burst, blossom - fall
form flowing from wisped whispers -

No place for perfection in poetry

8 comments:

  1. Time and vision written across -
    the stars of navied night blaze –No.
    No place for perfection in poetry

    Such a wonderful share :D indeed there is no place for perfection in poetry as it can not be bound or limited! Thank you so much for your kind participation Pearl :D it means a lot to me.

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  2. "the stars of navied night blaze" "filamented fibers floating - flying"
    Pearl, if this poem isn't perfection then it is pretty darn close. This is just a beauty to read.

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  3. a fantastic palindrome and the occasional alliteration's the icing on the cake....

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  4. loved this too! definitely, there's no place for perfection in poetry. everyone has his or her own way of writing it, especially a freewrite. I'm satisfied in the end. :)

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  5. I love this, especially:
    "form flowing from wisped whispers
    rustling leaves burst"

    gorgeous.

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  6. Luv the rhythm throughout, definitely a read aloud piece.there will be a lot of fun with those alliterative phrases

    Happy New Year

    Much love...

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  7. The alliteration is utter perfection.....stunning :-)

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