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Monday, September 17, 2012

September Heights Day 18. Starve




Day 18. Starve





Luscious tantilization
Filling mouth wetly and mind 
Screaming in the void 
















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7 comments:

  1. sad for the mind to be starving, when the body is full :-) I hope I got the message.

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  2. Is giving in to temptation always an end to starvation?

    Starve

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    1. Mhmmmm meant to convey feeling of the "starve" when one's mind and mouth are yearning for that which is elusive... Temptation too weak a word ... Good critique thanks!

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    2. I would now change first line to
      Tantalization

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  3. Good one, especially when I substitute "tantalization." There's a lot of emotion packed into that situation, most of it painful.

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  4. This is brilliant - there is more than one kind of starvation.

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