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Saturday, June 30, 2012

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unwavering line
knifed in packed, sun-whitened sand
restraining the tide



7 comments:

  1. perfection attained! 'knifed in' - what an image .... loved it

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  2. I'm sure Japan would have liked to have an unwavering line restraining the tide when the tsunami hit last year!

    Walking True

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  3. I could imagine the sea shore line when I read the first line,. nice!

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  4. Restraining the tide... i find this deep... how many things do life automatically hold us from?? oo true! lovely haiku :):)

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