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Thursday, February 23, 2012

Strings - The Overture





Strings - The Overture


There would be none
Said he sliding the
Check across the table
That late night at the diner
She suddenly stricken mute
Incapable of staying his slick straying
Fingers sliding Forever Indebted –The Overture
Over the fretted strings of her thong….


12 comments:

  1. Wow, you surprised me with that end! I was strung alone~
    Clever write~

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    1. Haha thanks Ella happy to have strung you and enjoyed the fun pun:)

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  2. The thong was quite the changeup for you, Pearl Girl! Loved this take on the prompt. Love, Amer
    http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2012/02/24/labor-room-blues-in-the-key-of-aargh/

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    1. Hi Amer... I enoy the entire keyboard :) Glad you enjoyed ...

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  3. Oh thanks Mad .... But for you might have missed this Thursday's tank... I was only getting last weeks.... So "tanks" in more ways than one :)

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  4. Loved this ... those pesky thong strings are most uncomfortable!

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  5. Cleverly done - and to telling effect.

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    1. Thank you Dave ... So much appreciate your stopping by... :)

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