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Sunday, October 9, 2011

WORDLE #25 That Callow Fellow


rambunctious, admire, swallows, pond, ballroom, obsolete,
hat-rack, fallow,  crumb, bell, automobile, garden 


There in the moon shine swallows’ wings dip in pond shadows
as a rambunctious fellow climbs from his new now obsolete
Model T- cranked driving automobile, leaving it cooling coughed sputters at the end of the road
as he walks with purposeful strides across the lawn through the lily garden tossing a crumb from his top-coat over his shoulder as the bell tolls nine, flamencos the foyer twirls his fedora from shimmering hair onto the gleaming hat-rack sheds his cashmere and keeps moving
inside the expectant faces of five innocent belles peal softly fallow
as he with his glinting eyes drenched in charm, cologne and swagger finally enters the parting velvet sea of admire

6 comments:

  1. I bet he has a well practiced swagger too :)
    Nice wordle.

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  2. Parting the velvet sea of admire--as long as he is the one being admired. Good one, Dr. Pearl.

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  3. Thanks to Daydreamer for whom these words called a similar feel....
    Thanks to Mike Patrick ...who moved me to tears with his Wordle this week!

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  4. "flamencos the foyer twirls his fedora from shimmering hair onto the gleaming hat-rack sheds his cashmere and keeps moving"

    - What a vivid picture you have painted with these wordle words. I could really visualise all of this! :-)

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  5. Hello.
    I'm returning the visit from Poetry Pantry.

    What fabulous imagery!
    He sounds like a man after my own heart, especially with that ending! (lol)

    Awesome piece!
    Thanks for sharing & visiting.
    I'm doing much better too. Thanks for asking.

    Woman As My Friend And Lover

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